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考研写作常见错误
Jimmy 2016-03-22 15:27:53 发表于  [  经验交流  ]
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1. 冠词使用错误

1Currently, a increasing number of population ……

错误:元音因素开头的单词increasing前的不定冠词应用an而不是a。写完的作文不仅要重看,更要重读,才能借助语感揪出这样的小错误。错误虽小,但是这种低级错误非常容易影响考官对你文章的总体印象

修改:Currently, an increasing number of population ……

 

2. 原文:However, whether government should invest in arts is controversial issue.

错误:issue是可数名词,单数可数名词前一定要有冠词。

修改:However, whether the government should invest in arts is a controversial issue.

 

3. 原文:However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services ...

诊断:fund表示政府拨款的资金,此处应该使用复数,表示多笔拨款。

修改:However, whether the government should allocate funds to public services ...

 

4. 原文:In my view, public services are vital to our life, but...

诊断:句子主语public service与谓语are不一致,主语是单数,而谓语是复数用法。此处public services泛指公共服务,应用复数。

修改:In my view, public services are vital to our life, but...

 

5. 原文:Nowadays, increasing number of people concerned about the enhancement of public services.

诊断:1)动词词组be concerned about...表示……关注。是固定搭配,这句话中使用时漏掉了be动词,导致整个句子没有谓语动词。

 

2) an increasing number of 这个搭配中缺少冠词。也是一错误。

修改:Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the enhancement of public services.

 

6. 原文:However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services other than waste...

诊断:other than,表示除了……之外,这里应该用rather than,表示而不是。这样整个句子的意思就通顺了。

修改:However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services rather than waste...


Jimmy 2021-03-05 05:18:21 重新编辑

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