1. 冠词使用错误

（1）Currently, a increasing number of population ……

错误：元音因素开头的单词increasing前的不定冠词应用an而不是a。写完的作文不仅要重看，更要“重读”，才能借助语感揪出这样的小错误。错误虽小，但是这种低级错误非常容易影响考官对你文章的总体印象

修改：Currently, an increasing number of population ……

2. 原文：However, whether government should invest in arts is controversial issue.

错误：issue是可数名词，单数可数名词前一定要有冠词。

修改：However, whether the government should invest in arts is a controversial issue.

3. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services ...

诊断：fund表示政府拨款的“资金”，此处应该使用复数，表示多笔拨款。

修改：However, whether the government should allocate funds to public services ...

4. 原文：In my view, public services are vital to our life, but...

诊断：句子主语public service与谓语are不一致，主语是单数，而谓语是复数用法。此处public services泛指“公共服务”，应用复数。

修改：In my view, public services are vital to our life, but...

5. 原文：Nowadays, increasing number of people concerned about the enhancement of public services.

诊断：1)动词词组be concerned about...表示“对……关注”。是固定搭配，这句话中使用时漏掉了be动词，导致整个句子没有谓语动词。

2) an increasing number of 这个搭配中缺少冠词。也是一错误。

修改：Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the enhancement of public services.

6. 原文：However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services other than waste...

诊断：other than，表示“除了……之外”，这里应该用rather than，表示“而不是”。这样整个句子的意思就通顺了。

修改：However, whether the government should allocate fund to public services rather than waste...