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How to Protect Privacy on Internet 如何保护好网络隐私(43)
yoyo 2015-10-09 16:19:38 发表于  [  实用英语  ]
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Directions:
Write a composition entitled How to Protect Privacy on Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.网络隐私的问题逐渐引起人们的关注;
2.如何保护好网络隐私;
3.保护网络隐私具有重要意义。

英语四级作文写作步骤构思:
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以网络隐私为主题的解释说明文。

步骤2:
引入话题:叙述人们在网上的信息得不到很好的保护这一现状;
展开话题:分析应该如何保护网络隐私;
话题结论:阐述保护好个人网络隐私的重要性。

英语四级作文背诵范文:

How to Protect Privacy on Internet
如何保护好网络隐私

Do you worry that your private information such as address, salary or telephone number on Internet will be let out without your permission? This has become the common for many people.
你是否担心你网上的私人信息,如地址、工资或电话号码在未经你许可的情况下被泄露呢?这对许多人来说已变得很常见了。

The hot discussion on how to protect privacy on Intemet has lasted for these years. The following several reasons are approved by the mainstream of the  society. For one thing, our govemment is expected to make stricter laws or regulations to protect privacy on Internet from leaking out. For another, both mass media and schools should educate people to keep their promises and seal their mouths on others’ privacy. Besides, in some fields, personal information has been transacted for pursuing profits. And therefore cutting off the profitable chain plays a vital role in protecting personal privacy.
就如何保护网络隐私的热烈讨论已经持续了多年。以下几个原因是社会主流普遍认可的。一方面,我们的政府有望制定更严格的法律或规范,以防止互联网上的隐私世露。另一方面,大众媒体和学校应教育人们遵守承诺, 对他人的隐私守口如瓶。此外,在某些领域,为追求利润,个人信息被拿来做交易。因此,切断这种利润链在保护个人隐私中起着非常重要的作用。

Could you imagine that we’re relaxing, listening to music or surging on Internet at home while our personal information is spreading or even being exchanged illegally? Only if privacy is protected effectively and create a clean cyber environment, can people feel at ease to surge the web. (180 words)
你能想象到,当我们正在家放松、昕音乐或上网时,我们的个人信息正在传播,甚至被非法交换吗?只有有效地保护隐私,才能创造一个干净的网络环境,人们才能安心地在网上冲浪。

英语四级作文加分词:
let out   泄漏
permission     n.同意,允许
mainstream    n.主流
leak out   泄渴
keep one’s promise   信守承诺
seal one’s mouth   守口如瓶
cut off   切断
profitable chain   利益链
vital    adj.重要的
illegally   adv.不法地,违法地
surge the web  上网

英语四级作文高分句型解析:
Do you worry that your private information such as address, salary or telephone number on Internet will be let out without your permission? 你是否担心你网上的私人信息,如地址、工资或电话号码在未经你许可的情况下被泄露呢?

点评:这句话是that引导的宾语从句,活用了短语“let out”,且这句话采用问句的形式,通过问答的方式,使得文章很有气势,这也是这篇文章的特点。


yoyo 2022-06-27 05:59:24 重新编辑

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