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Ken 2016-10-14 20:20:28 发表于  [  国内考试  ]
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choose a particuler brand for children为小学生选择一种牌子的面包

you have been asked to recommend a particular brand of bread for use in elementary schools in a small city . which of the four brands of bread described in the chart would you recommend ? support your choice with information from the chart below .

which brand of bread is the most suitable for elementary school children ? before we make the choice , there are three things we need to take into account : taste, nutrition and cost .

among the three , i believe nutrition is the most important . children in elementary schools are at an age when their bodies are growing rapidly . malnutrition will certainly hinder their bodies from growing , and poor health will often result in poor learning . taste is also important because tasty bread can help stimulate children’s appetite . children will not like to eat poor- tasting bread regardless of its level of nutrition . a good appetite guarantees sufficient nutrition .

therefore , i will certainly recommend brand a, because both its nutrition and taste are very good .

neither brand c nor brand d is a good choice because the former has a very good nutritional ra ting but not a good taste ; while the latter has an excellent taste but only a fair nutritional rating .

being less nutritional and tasteful , brand b is not as good a choice as brand a, despite their similar costs . so , that leaves only brand a . it is true that brand a has the highest price , but i believe that most of the schools would not really mind paying a little bit more money for school childr en’s better health .

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cet6六级作文结构分析:

· which brand of bread to choose ?
* three factors to be conside red: nutrition , taste and cost
· nutrition as against taste
* a comparison
* impor tance of nutrition
* impor tance of taste
* decision
· an analysis
* brand c and brand d
* brand b
* final choice — a
* price — no problem

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cet6六级作文内容分析:

本文是一篇图表作文, 要求按图表中提示的信息为小学生选择一种牌子的面包。本题曾为一托福考题, 作者“ 借题发挥”根据自己的思路作文。这类题型的写作多用比较和对照, 这也是托福写作的一大特点。此外, 这类作文的结论不受限制, 完全  可按作者的意图来写, 但必须有充足的理由。本文中, 作者首先分述营养与口味两大因素并加以比较和权衡, 而价格则不在话下。四者相比后决定选a。然后在第三段中排除c 和d, 最后 a 和b 相比, 决定选择最好的。本文适合多种考试的应试者,以托福考生为最。

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cet6六级作文万能句型:

take . . . into account 考虑⋯⋯ 
at an age when . . . 在⋯⋯的年龄 
malnutrition n . 营养不良 
hinder v . 防止, 妨碍 
regardless of 不管, 不顾 
despite prep . 尽管 
it is true that . . . 诚然 

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