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托福写作模板究竟应该怎么用?同学你知道吗?
Maeva 2016-09-26 10:22:07 发表于  [  公开课  ]
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作为能快速提高分数的方法,写作模板不只是同学爱用,老师们也喜欢帮学生归纳总结。但是模板也有很多显而易见的坏处,比如一旦被发现就会降低考官的印象。所以有很多的同学会对模板有疑问:到底能不能用模板?托福写作模板应该怎么用?首先一起来看一个例子。一个是好的,一个是不好的,同学们自己来判断一下。 

  第一篇: 
  Nowadays, thanks to the development of Internet, we are exposed to a vast ocean of information. Some argue that so much information brings a great benefit to our life and study. But for me, the experience with surfing Internet leads me to believe that accessing much information cause more problems than it solves. 

  第二篇: 
  Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to students as education. Despite various responses people may have on the topic concerning the issue regarding which thing should the education aim at. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that preparing for careers should have primary consideration. 

  看到第一篇文章,同学们的第一反应是什么?太熟悉了。对,从Nowadays这个被推崇的单词,到thanks to接宾语,模板的痕迹一览无遗,再继续往下看更确认了这种看法,这种大篇幅套用模板的文章分数不会太差,但也不会太高。 

  再看第二篇的文章,初看觉得文章写得不错,用词准确且地道,而且没有太多模板的痕迹,但其实文章中搜很多模板句的,只是做了适当的修改,让它变得很“原创”,比如Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to就是一个模板,比如“given the chance”,虽然没有语义的改变,但加进来之后,会让人感觉非常的地道。通过上面的例子,你应该知道如何使用模板了,即通过常用模板摸索出有自己写语言风格的模板,整理的一些托福写作常用模板,同学们可以适当参考。 

  一、分层论证 
  Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from 
  _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, 
  On one hand_________, On the other hand_________ 
  Besides/ What’s more/ In addition. 
  这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节。 

  二、举例论证 
  Further lending credence to my position is that____________ 
  I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(一般例子)________
  一句话总结例子:As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样 

  三、让步段 
  Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance, ______ 
  However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./ 
  二选一:Admittedly, BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____ However,BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, )it pales. 

  四、结尾段 
  Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them, I reinforce my stand point that. 



Maeva 2022-09-27 17:19:09 重新编辑

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