Part of the following sentence is underlined; beneaththe sentence are five ways of phrasing theunderlined material. Select the option that producesthe best sentence. If you think the originalphrasing produces a better than any of thealternatives, select choice A.
Mexican painter Frida Kahlo drew inspiration fromher Mexican , where she incorporated nativeand religious symbols into her work.
A. where she incorporated
B. in which she incorporated
E. therefore, she incorporated
Correct Answer: D
Choice (D) is correct. It avoids the error of the original by eliminating the relative pronoun“where,” which does not logically refer to anything else in the sentence, and by reducing theneedlessly wordy “she incorporated” to “incorporating.”
Question Type: Improving Sentences